Does it need more? Less?
Chapter 1
Ricky leaned on the buzzer at the door to
the apartment building. In this area around the university there were all kinds
of accommodation, some more secure than others. To someone delivering pizzas,
like Ricky did that summer vacation, it became a game to classify buildings
according to ease of access. There were the walk-ins, the Fort Knoxes, and then
buildings like this one with a sort of middling . You had to be buzzed in, but
probably the customer would be well off enough to give a good tip.